A SpaceX employee says that she spent seven years working at the company’s headquarters in Hawthorne, California enduring sexual abuse, unequal pay, discrimination, sexual harassment, and retaliation, in a new lawsuit against the company. But her story paints a much graver picture than those individual words can convey, describing widespread harassment and coordinated action to not only enable but also later give cover for sexual coercion, by a man she says was her direct supervisor.
Not saying there’s no bias toward seeing women as victims compared to men (https://www.theguardian.com/commentisfree/2011/jun/07/feminism-domestic-violence-men), but the way you phrase it sounds super misogynist.
So maybe you should reflect on that a bit, if you’re serious about getting an actual point across.